You caught me red handed there bud!
This may still be in need of an edit but is an improvement. Thank you for pointing out the undeniable blunder; that's what you get when you live in a glass house.
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Originally Posted by Hardyreels
I took a look; please pardon me for spotting this but I do write a bit. Although I am not not a professor of literature, I never made it past the second sentence before this jabbed me..............
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Although my error may be indefensible, I'll still try. I was speaking, or in this case writing, in a conversational manner. The butchered punctuation is often present in speech as we rush to make a point. Had I been submitting the sentence to the UPI, Reuters, or the like, I would have done a tad of polish prior to hitting the 'post' button
I guess my whole point was that it would be nice if professional journalists were to write a little better than a guy posting to a fishing forum.