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Originally Posted by schrodingers cat
"Fly fishing is an angling method to catch fish in which an artificial fly is used."
I can find nothing wrong with the first sentence; short, concise and accurate. Why would you want it changed?
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LOL,
Not that concise . . . . "Fly fishing is an angling method in which an artificial fly is used" is concise! Doesn't really say much though about exactly what fly fishing is (the distinctive casting, tackle, etc.) and I often use fry patterns or full-blown 'fishes' when piking. How do they figure? How is 'fly' defined? The only definition in the first sentence is that angling is a "method to catch fish". But we knew that already.
I do agree that it is a rather sloppy and at times, misleading read, especially if you try and read it from the perspective of someone not conversant with the sport. It is also rather narrow, outdated and idealised . . . ..
Be good to see it revised. I don't have the time but would be happy to assist and/or review?
Andy