Good effort Jock. It's nice to see someone having the courage to give paired slip wings a go. I know it's no longer fashionable, but is that because paired slips don't work or because people can't be ersed to learn in the current 'instant gratification' society? IMO paired slips definitely have a place with some patterns and other materials just don't give the same effect. Years ago, you weren't considered a fly dresser until you could do a decent wing. Next one to try is a slip half the depth of the gape and don't forget the vulcan death grip.