Thanks Chris for your comments. The Black fly is an tied on an #18 TMC 2457. The Head was small and i put a dob of black varnish on it to make it look more like a head. The body was one tiny pinch of wapsi super fine dry fly dubbing. from what you say i should of just used thread and no dubbing. The wing is black cdc, I thought it was to long

it shows how much there is to learn thats why i put the thread on.
The second was my interpretation of a Sulphur Emerger - Yellow May ( page 30 Matching the Hatch Peter Lapsley)
Sorry about the quality of the photo's i loaded them onto Flickr and copied the url.
I have added my 3rd picture which is again an atempt at a Yellow May
Regards
Ian