Nice idea that. Do you find they work?
Have to admit I like the second one better - straight abdomen which won't pierce the surface film.
What hair have you used as the wing?
Incidentally you may find the below interesting. I've been looking for a good, easily visible spinner pattern for a few years now and I reckon I've finally hit the jackpot. It's a corruption of Stu Crofts'/Kelly Galloup's spinner cripple, based on a cranked hook to imitated the 'one wing up, one wing flat, contorted abdomen' attitude of most spinners as they lie on the water. Have a look next time you're stood in the middle of a bwo fall and you'll see what I mean......deadly!
Matt