That's a nice tie Steve. Doesn't seem too much up with the general proportions to me. My only slight niggle would be that it seems a little fat in the body... unless that's just the way it comes across in the pic? I'll let you off if it looks fat because the dubbing has been seriosly ragged out! Now
that I can deal with

Down to personal taste though I suppose. I just don't like me dabblers and wets in general to be too fat in the midriff area.
That's quite a cute shade you've got there for the body... something almost child-like about it - like a cuddly toy type colour or something! Most unusual.
Is it a Dabbler? Well, I'm with Alex, so to speak, on this one. The silver mallard hangs more hackle-like than wing or cloak-like - therefore, it ain't a Dabbler. You'll find that a true dabbler profile, and dabbler 'action' and behavior in the water very difficult to achieve with the silver.
As a fly though I think it's kinda cool. I'd never have chosen that colour in a million years, but seeing it up there it's kind of interesting. Looks a little cute and cuddly though.. could do with toughening up a bit...the bronze should do that nicely, and perhaps some evil looking JC splits? Grrrrrrrrr