Hi Urbanflyman
a good first attempt,,it will get better as you begin to learn some photography skills....
here are a few hints (not that im any expert)..
try placing a BLUE card behind the fly as it shows up a lot more detail..
zoom in a little closer so that you show more of the fly as it helps to show the pic`s a bit clearer OR you could crop the photos,,alternatey you can use MACRO mode if your camera has that function....
here is an example of using a BLUE card backround and zooming in a little
this image could also have been cropped
this image also uses a blue backround but this time it was cropped
it makes the fly and the details so much better
hope this is of some help to you...
Regards
CORONA