Hi Bill nice ties mate. I wouldn't worry too much as you're wings are tied in well without bulking up at the heads, no neatly tied off. I would have my false hackles licking around the point of the hook, or slightly in front, or slightly over, your preference but those are slightly too long. Your wings just need a little work on the shape and size, but I bet you will catch fish on those.
When tying in tinsel bodies, I tie the material in from the bend up to the eye, then start wrapping the tinsel down the body in tight touching turns at a 45 degree angle, then when I reach my tag (rib) I come under and up and reverse that 45 degree angle so I'm now leaning the turns towards the eye of the hook, and keeping it very taught it's touching turns (slightly over lapping locks the last turn in) back up to the eye and tie off. Then lock everything in with your rib. I find this is the easiest way to get a tinsel body looking really tight and seamless. This is much easier to achieve a nice smooth finish using mylar or lurex, as Wobbly Face says.