I want to tie some very small, heavily weighted PTN for small river/brook fishing.
I have had a go, using a copper wire based pattern, so now I woul dappreciate some help and tips to make it fishable.
In particular, I find it difficult to keep the PT fibres straight at the back, they always seem to fall behind the side of the hook after I secure them.
Also, can I build the thorax up a little moore, to add more weight?
Finally, I dont have a fiishing tool, is it daft to try this without one, or will my method of open tie and varnish work?
Hook is a size 18, comments on my choice there please (its the only barbless they had anywhere near suitable)
Nothing other than copper wire and PT fibres.
Please dont be polite, criticism will be welcomed, I have posted this so that I can find out what I am doing wrong !

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