Yellow para

[the stig]

CHEERS BERT

[silversedge]

Not much wrong wi that Bert,maybe a smaller hackle mate

[falsecast]

Nice tie Bert. I tend to like a couple of turns of loose fibres/dubbing around the hook under the post

[the stig]

[B]last one i done was told to use grizzle hackle and the dubbing fibre,s[were to loose although they were tied tight so just left them out on this one

cheers Bert/B]

[emerger1981]

like S.S said and add a thorax
other than that your getting there..

[the stig]

thanks emerger will do

cheers bert

[seanie]

Very nice Bert

[busbiegaz]

nice tying there bert

[Wee Jimmy]

Much better with the grizzle hackle eh Bert... To my eye,the flue is a bit long on that one though.I like the fibres to end just short of the hook bend.I doubt if the fish will mind that much though.

[the stig]

thanks all take all comments on board to strive to do better

cheers bert