I agree with Highlander. I think you are trying to do too much all at once. Best take a simple pattern and master the techniques used for that before building on that foundation by adding skills step by step. I speak from experience, as when I first started, I tried to tie everything in sight. Eventually, I had to slow down, go back and learn the basics before I could really progress.
All that said, considering that these are your first flies, they are very good.
